Ryan - First Draft
In the beginning there were two sisters called Kahu and Sissy. They were out in the garden doing jobs with Nan kahu was complaining that sissy wasn't doing jobs. Kahu and sissy found a magic kete and the last buring finger nail of mahuika came out of the kete. Nan turned to coal and kahu and sissy had to save Nan. They fold potiki to the under world to Mahuika on the way pukeko kidnapped potiki and took potiki to Mahuika because Mahuika put curse on pukeko's beak.
Nan froze and potki appeared out of no were and potki said you have 1 day until Nan turns in to coal. potki said you can save Nan if you go to my Mather and she will not turn in to coal saw sissy pilled a kite out of the magic kete it tolled them were to go saw sissy and kahu walked to the swamp and they thread to run ucrose the swamp but they got poached back and then a prsine came out of the swamp and sissy got the quiz but kahu had to stay be hind and sissy got to go to Mahuika to save Nan and Potiki.
Kylan - First Draft
Once upon a time kahu was chasing sissy and trying to get her to do her jobs. Nan said stop doing that and come help me with this job. Nan kahu said why dose sissy always run away when its time to do jobs? well we all do our parts to help, I guess said kahu. Then sissy whizzed past and Nan caught sissy and said you to stay here. Out of the corner of there eyes the saw a kete and when they opened it Nan tuned to coal. hello said Potiki I am the last flaming finger nail of mahuika.
Then he realised what he had done to Nan. He said oh no I will have to go to the underground to get my mum to take the curse off of her. when they got close pukeko saw them.
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